A Critique on Politcal Coj Editorial Post

 

On Wednesday, December 3, 2014 Political Coj wrote about the pressure Obama faces for everything wrong that happens in the United States. Political Coj believes “Obama is not a bad president as most people think”. She describes how Obama main promise of helping with immigration policy. She believes with this that Obama has shown his worth as president and has shown that he will do what he promises.

In this she tells us that it has taken Obama 5 years to accomplished one goal he has set for himself.  Also telling us people have been disappointed before he finally tackled this issue. With this I believe that she is right in that Obama should not be blamed for everything wrong that happens; but I also believe he should be responsible for fixing the severe problems and be judged on how he deals with these issue.

Political Coj gives a great reason why she believes that president Obama is doing what he say and why we should not blame him for everything wrong that happens. I agree with her reason and analysis but I also think that Obama should be doing more and that he should be judge on how he helping sever issues that do occur. Political Coj should give more reasons on why citizen should not be disappointed in our president.

Illegal Immigrants

Illegal immigrants should not have the right to vote because they show bias towards representatives who support there legalization. Illegal immigrants will chose reps that will benefit them as one rather than the nation as a whole. This is harmful to legal residents because those people chosen may not have helpful policy's to benefit residents. Voting can be harmful when people make ignorant choices which negatively affect are society. Knowing that illegal immigrant’s intentions are self-serving we know that letting them vote could be a bad decision. Leading to people in office who is not qualified or there to help the people they will represent.
            I acknowledge that illegal immigrants are responsible for helping citizens by cheaper work and paying taxes without receiving benefits or higher pay to support their families. Which leads them to explore the opportunity to vote? When they vote they will vote to help them receive benefits, higher pay and legal residency. These votes can potentially change the lives of American citizens by causing People to lose money from the taxes they provide and spend more for higher labor.
 
       In conclusion allowing illegal immigrants to vote to help themselves become legal and gain more rights is harmful to American citizens. Not only can they make ignorant decision but they can also take money away from them. Sadly we find this harmful because we want representatives how worry about issues that will help will benefit us rather than help the individuals who have illegally come to the United States.